All Comments on 'Ashley Ch 14: Finale'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

What an erotic series. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

13 and 14 feel more like you were trying to wrap it up in a lengthy, wordy way

Otherwise it was brilliant and you could easily have carried on in the previous manner for ages

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

How did the end turn so blatantly into "everything become so much better embracing modern societal beliefs in no time at all turning the world into a paradise where everyone clapped!" It just kept getting more obvious, like good for hoping so but it just felt extremely hamfisted and disingenuous.

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I have some stories that come to me in my dreams that just won't go away, so I've written them down. Maybe some other people would like to read my stories so I'm publishing them on Literotica. I hope that you enjoy. I'm working on another long series so please be patient with...

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